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                                          Do                             Don’t


                                      "The new policy aims to       "We are excited to announce our
                                      promote environmental         new policy, which will contribute to
                                      sustainability by             our efforts in achieving
                                      reducing carbon               environmental sustainability goals
                                      emissions."                   by reducing carbon emissions."




                                   Figure 36: Do’s and Don’ts of Impartial Writing


                   7.1.3.2.    Writing Style

                               Content should be clear and understandable for users with different
                               literacy levels and access challenges. To ensure this:


                               i.  Use simple words: Complex or technical terms should be replaced
                                  with simpler alternatives that are easy for everyone to understand.


                                   •   "use" instead of "utilize"


                                   •   "buy” instead of “purchase”


                                   •   “help” instead of “assist”


                               ii.  Short sentences, paragraphs, and bullet points:  Content should
                                   be broken down into short sentences and paragraphs, each
                                   focusing on one main idea. Use bullet points where appropriate.





                                           Do                          Don’t


                                      "Enter your username        "In order to access your account, you will
                                      and password, then          need to enter your username and
                                      click 'Sign In'."           password into the designated fields, then
                                                                  click the 'Sign In' button located at the
                                                                  bottom of the page."




                                   Figure 37: Do’s and Don’ts for Writing Sentences

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